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437. HE wins…

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While waiting for Life’s line,

praying hard to see its moves..

to see, it dancing, in the tunes..

of the beeps of the..

electrocardiogram machine..!!

When Life’s graph..

starts rising upward,

again, helplessly diminishing,

to that point of no return..!!

When all the doctors hands,

stand still, on the..

medical equipments,

their retinas glued..

reading the heart’s route,

silence surrounds the ICU..!!

Breaths gasp for life, to and fro,

each one praying for HIS mercy,

all waiting, to watch HIM,

play his miracle..!!

HE smiles, watching us..

as we all readily gave in to HIM..

finding medical science silent,

with its muted machines,

hence, Life breathes in,

thus, helping HIM win..!!

……………………….βœπŸΌπŸ’•

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Author: The Typewriter

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43 thoughts on “437. HE wins…

  1. Wow! This is BRILLIANT Debby. I can’t express my feelings about this one. It hit me. So true ❀️

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  2. I can understand that feeling very well Lorraine.. thank you so much for getting it right there.. πŸ˜‡πŸ’•

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  3. You are so welcome Debby. Such a moving piece πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•

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  4. this is so brilliantly written……….such a tragic ending……..

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  5. I know.. got goosebumps myself, while writing.. so so humbled.. πŸ˜‡πŸ’•

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  6. ❀️❀️❀️

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  7. In the End our life span is up to HIM and nothing can be done to extend it.

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  8. So sorry, I couldn’t put the ending correctly, it isn’t tragic.. I edited it.. thanks, you helped me correct it.. πŸ˜‡πŸ’•

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  9. True Nanette.. absolutely..!!
    Thank you.. πŸ˜‡πŸ’•

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  10. Thank you.. 😊❀️

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  11. I know ! I thought it was great…….just sad.

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  12. You’re welcome πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€

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  13. Ohh yes., and equally scary, to watch someone near going through it too..
    Thanks a bunch Wendi.. πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡

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  14. This is brilliantly written! Absolutely beautiful!!

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  15. Thank you.. humbled.. πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡

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  16. Thanks a bunch.. humbled.. πŸ˜‡πŸ’•

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  17. His ways are great! ❀️

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  18. Yes, indeed.. thanks re.. πŸ˜‡πŸ’•

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  19. You are welcome, my dear! πŸ€—πŸ’ž

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  20. Brilliant ❀️

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  21. Humbled.. πŸ˜‡πŸ’•

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  22. Beautiful Debby πŸ‘Œβ€οΈ

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  23. Yes, that is the moment, people give in to Him… Beautifully written πŸ‘Œ πŸ‘Œ

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  24. Thanks a bunch for sharing your words here.. humbled.. πŸ˜‡πŸ’•

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  25. Thank you Sonia.. πŸ˜‡πŸ’•

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  26. So well written. Hope all is well with you and yours. Happy that He won! Om Namah Shivaya!

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  27. Yes, we all are under his grace now.. Om Namah Shivay.. πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡

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  28. I love the hope, I love it ended 🌸

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  29. Thanks a bunch.. πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡

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  30. We are all mortals. We all have our time to leave this world. So let’s appreciate each moment that we are still breathing.

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  31. Indeed.. appreciate your time and words in my little corner.. humbled much.. πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡

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  32. My absolute pleasure! πŸ’•πŸ˜Š

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  33. Wow… Powerfully True, beautifully written πŸ’œπŸŒΈ

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  34. Thanks a bunch.. πŸ€—πŸ’•

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  35. You are welcome, the pleasure is all mine

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