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296. His Last Call..

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“…. Krrriinnng… Krrriinnng… “

The phone rings..

Calls the King..

Wishes “Happy birthday..!!”

To his Princess.

πŸ’•

No one knows..

Whose call, which, when..

Rings the last..??

After days seventeen, just..

Death rings its call..

And the King finally departs.

πŸ’•

Folded him, took him back with his breath, last..

His princess performs his rites, last..

Bids him bye, while he heads for his journey, last..

Her first love, for the last time, thus..

From her phone, that voice, last..

Goes forever quiet.

πŸ’•

Her phone won’t show..

‘Baba calling’.. anymore..

A daughter faces a loss..

Lost her first Man of everlasting Love.

πŸ’•

Though, the King, no more..

His name, his voice…

Remains stored..

Forever, in his Princess’s phone.

……………………………….βœπŸΌπŸ’•

Author: The Typewriter

Nothing worth mentioning... πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡

46 thoughts on “296. His Last Call..

  1. Reminds me of the stories floating about soldiers in pulwama attack ….one was on phone talking to his wife during the blast😒😒

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  2. πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘dis call always speaks a lot πŸ™‡

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  3. Absolutely Sakshi.. that voice will stay, silently in her ears, loud in her heart.. forever.. πŸ’•

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  4. It does Nirant.. πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ™‚

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  5. It touch my heart…. Beautifully written…

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  6. Thank you Tanushri.. πŸ™‚πŸ’•

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  7. Touching….such tragedy leaves an indelible scar. A very emotional piece of writing Debika.

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  8. I can understand Radhika.. it’s indeed a piece of my bleeding heart.. thank you so much dear.. πŸ™‚πŸ’•

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  9. sadly beautiful.. very touching debby

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  10. Haan re.. πŸ™‚πŸ’•

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  11. Your words touched my heart!πŸ’žπŸ™

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  12. Thank you so much for your time and words here Sonia.. πŸ˜‡πŸ’•

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  13. My pleasure! Love your writing!πŸŒ»πŸŒ»πŸ‘Œ

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  14. Much much humbled.. πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡

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  15. Touching!

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  16. Thank you.. πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ™‚

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  17. It’s heart breaking πŸ’”πŸ˜«πŸ˜ͺ

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  18. Another beautiful tribute to your Father, he will long stay in your soul’s memories.

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  19. Yes, thanks a bunch for reading and understanding.. much humbled.. πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ™‚

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  20. Yes Nanette.. thank you so much.. πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡

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  21. So true 😒

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  22. πŸ˜”πŸ˜”πŸ˜”

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  23. Thank you so much Yasmin.. πŸ˜‡πŸ’•

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  24. Thank you so much.. πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡

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  25. Baba will always remain in his princess’ heart! Touching. πŸ€—β€οΈ

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  26. Yes, it is.. πŸ™‚
    Thank you so much for getting its feel.. πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡

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  27. Oh I so love this one !!

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  28. Thank you.. πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡

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  29. Reblogged this on Thoughtsmith and commented:

    Let his princess wish The King, a Happy Father’s Day.. from here, to there…. 😊❀️

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  30. So heart breaking and gently beautiful amidst the tears.

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  31. Oooh, debby. This is SO sad. But true. Made me shiver.

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  32. I can understand that shiver very much dear.. we all know what and how it feels.. thank you Lorraine.. πŸ™‚πŸ’•

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  33. Debby this poem is so sad and so beautiful. The creative way that this poem is written really touches my heart. -Jill

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  34. Thank you so much Jill.. πŸ˜‡πŸ’•

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  35. You are welcome dear friend.

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